This is the first patch series aimed to overhaul our documentation. The main goal is to make it easier to understand and more consistent. Therefore the phrasing is changed in a lot of places, sometimes the ordering of content as well. I tried to align the source to the 80 characters per line wherever possible.
Even though it was agreed with Fabian for him to proof read it on a technical level everyone please give feedback if you find technical errors or outdated information and of course typos :). The reason why this first patch series doesn't start at the very beginning is because we are not yet happy with few things there. Aaron Lauterer (9): Rewrite Getting Help Rewrite Improve PVE Docs Rewrite Translation Rewrite Installation Rewrite System Requirements Rewrite Install from USB flash drive Rewrite Sysadmin Rewrite Package Repositories Rewrite System Software Updates getting-help.adoc | 42 +++--- howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc | 42 +++--- pve-installation.adoc | 278 +++++++++++++++++------------------ pve-package-repos.adoc | 154 +++++++++---------- pve-system-requirements.adoc | 69 ++++----- pve-usbstick.adoc | 109 +++++++------- sysadmin.adoc | 40 ++--- system-software-updates.adoc | 25 ++-- translation.adoc | 38 ++--- 9 files changed, 388 insertions(+), 407 deletions(-) -- 2.20.1 _______________________________________________ pve-devel mailing list pve-devel@pve.proxmox.com https://pve.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel
