On 6/12/19 3:06 PM, Stefan Reiter wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Stefan Reiter <s.rei...@proxmox.com>
> ---
> pve-installation.adoc | 2 +-
> pve-intro.adoc | 6 +++---
> pve-network.adoc | 28 ++++++++++++++--------------
> pve-package-repos.adoc | 2 +-
> qm-pci-passthrough.adoc | 12 ++++++------
> 5 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)
>
applied, with a small fixup (see below). @Aaron, sorry if I get in your
way with your bigger rewrite, but I'd like to have this already in for
the case it needs a bit longer to get your work reviewed in a good manner.
Git should take care of most things anyway, and else it's a good way
to improve merge conflict skills ;P
> diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc
> index f15258e..691d236 100644
> --- a/pve-installation.adoc
> +++ b/pve-installation.adoc
> @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ you can choose disks there. Additionally you can set
> additional options (see
>
> [thumbnail="screenshot/pve-select-location.png", float="left"]
>
> -The next page just ask for basic configuration options like your
> +The next page just asks for basic configuration options like your
> location, the time zone and keyboard layout. The location is used to
> select a download server near you to speed up updates. The installer is
> usually able to auto detect those settings, so you only need to change
> diff --git a/pve-intro.adoc b/pve-intro.adoc
> index e4a8d99..7b236be 100644
> --- a/pve-intro.adoc
> +++ b/pve-intro.adoc
> @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ enables you to store the configuration of thousands of
> virtual
> machines. By using corosync, these files are replicated in real time
> on all cluster nodes. The file system stores all data inside a
> persistent database on disk, nonetheless, a copy of the data resides
> -in RAM which provides a maximum storage size is 30MB - more than
> +in RAM which provides a maximum storage size of 30MB - more than
> enough for thousands of VMs.
> +
> Proxmox VE is the only virtualization platform using this unique
> @@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ Flexible Networking
> Proxmox VE uses a bridged networking model. All VMs can share one
> bridge as if virtual network cables from each guest were all plugged
> into the same switch. For connecting VMs to the outside world, bridges
> -are attached to physical network cards assigned a TCP/IP
> +are attached to physical network cards and assigned a TCP/IP
> configuration.
>
> For further flexibility, VLANs (IEEE 802.1q) and network
> @@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ Open source software also helps to keep your costs low
> and makes your
> core infrastructure independent from a single vendor.
>
>
> -Your benefit with {pve}
> +Your benefits with {pve}
> -----------------------
the marker for headlines ('-' in this case) should be aligned with
the headline itself. IIRC, with templates as {pve} it get's corrected
anyway, but else it can result in a build failure, so best to always
do it.
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