On 31.03.2025 10:44, Shannon Sterz wrote:
On Fri Mar 28, 2025 at 6:13 PM CET, Gabriel Goller wrote:
[snip]

I agree with everthing above.

+
+Router-ID Selection
+^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
+
+Each node in a fabric needs a unique router ID, which is an IPv4 (or IPv6 in
+OpenFabric) address in dotted-decimal notation (e.g., 192.168.1.1).

does this apply to v6 too? i've never seen IPv6 represented in dotted
decimal notation. imo if you mention IPv6 here, you should specify it's
representation. maybe:

Each node in a fabric needs a unique router ID, which is an IPv4 address
in dotted decimal notation (e.g. 192.168.1.1). In OpenFabric this can
also be an IPv6 address in the typical hexadecimal representation
separated by colons (e.g., 2001:db8::1428:57ab).

Oops, yeah I forgot this.

[snip]
+Name:: This is the name of the OpenFabric fabric and can be at most 8 
characters long.
+
+Loopback Prefix:: CIDR (IPv4 or IPv6) network range (e.g., 10.0.0.0/24) used 
to verify that
+all router-IDs in the fabric are contained within this prefix.
+
+Hello Interval:: Controls how frequently (in seconds) hello packets are sent to
+discover and maintain connections with neighboring nodes. Lower values detect
+failures faster but increase network traffic. If empty, the default value will

what is the default value? would it make sense to mention that here?

I decided against using default values as I wanted FRR to handle them.
We also don't set default-options in the FRR config, but just delete the
property and let FRR handle it.

Maybe I could write the: "the default FRR value will be used"?

+be used. This option is global on the fabric, meaning every interface on every
+node in this fabric will inherit this hello-interval property.
+
+[[pvesdn_openfabric_node]]
+On the Node
+^^^^^^^^^^^
+
+Node:: Select the node which will be added to the fabric. Only nodes that
+currently are in the cluster will be shown.
+
+Router-ID:: A unique IPv4 or IPv6 address used to generate the OpenFabric
+Network Entity Title (NET). Each node in the same fabric must have a different
+Router-ID, while a single node must use the same NET address across all fabrics
+(this consistency is automatically managed by {pve}).
+
+NOTE: When using IPv6 addresses, we use the last 3 segments to generate the
+NET. Ensure these segments differ between nodes.

would it make sense to make this a `WARNING` instead of a `NOTE`? sounds
like this is a bit more important to get right.

yep, I agree.

[snip]
+[[pvesdn_ospf_fabric]]
+On the Fabric
+^^^^^^^^^^^^^
+
+Area:: This specifies the OSPF area identifier, which can be either an integer
+(i32) or an IP address. Areas are a way to organize and structure OSPF networks

i32 is super intuitive for Rust programmers but "32-bit signed integer"
would be clearer to everyone else ;)

Will fix this as well.

Thanks for looking over this! The docs are still quite spare, so I hope
I'll get around adding more stuff for the next version.


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