On 2024-08-13 12:23, Alexander Zeidler wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeid...@proxmox.com>
> ---
> pve-network.adoc | 4 ++--
> 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/pve-network.adoc b/pve-network.adoc
> index acdcf39..434430d 100644
> --- a/pve-network.adoc
> +++ b/pve-network.adoc
> @@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ slaves in the single logical bonded interface such that
> different
> network-peers use different MAC addresses for their network packet
> traffic.
>
> -If your switch support the LACP (IEEE 802.3ad) protocol then we recommend
> using
> +If your switch supports the LACP (IEEE 802.3ad) protocol then we recommend
> using
^
There should be comma here: If ..., then ...
> the corresponding bonding mode (802.3ad). Otherwise you should generally use
> the
> active-backup mode.
>
> @@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ iface vmbr0 inet static
>
>
> [thumbnail="default-network-setup-bond.svg"]
> -Another possibility it to use the bond directly as bridge port.
> +Another possibility is to use the bond directly as bridge port.
> This can be used to make the guest network fault-tolerant.
>
> .Example: Use a bond as bridge port
Apart from this, this looks good to me:
Reviewed-by: Lukas Wagner <l.wag...@proxmox.com>
--
- Lukas
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