Thanks for the link to your Site-in-Progress.  http://erw1.myfreesites.net/ 
<http://erw1.myfreesites.net/>
Here are some comments.

1. Is this a part of the ERW Programming site, or a standalone for VFP?
   It's not clear, and should be stated in the Home page.
   (The fact that it's called the 'Home' page indicates that it is a separate 
site, or sub-site.)
   
2. About page should start with the name of your company and what it does.

3. I think the Home Page should just outline the choices - you've said the same 
thing in your Choices subpages. Better yet, don't outline the choices in Home, 
just point to where you did outline them.

4. Contacts needs an email address. Who writes letters today?

Overall - Good job and I think we need this. I like the pros/cons.

Dan Covill - ProFox


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