I share the impressions of Cyril here. The relation between the "P" and
the rest of the "illar" seems too much disproportionate. The second
pillar doesn't help with readability and I know about Pharo things kind
of "sea" related, but I would try to focus more on known pillars like
[1] or [2] as a base for abstractions instead of the ones behind the
piers. Logos are difficult and you're making a great work with the
code, so is nice to that you're taking the feedback also with the art of
Pillar.
[1] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Colonne-p1040009.jpg
[2] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Schema_Saeulenordnungen.jpg
Cheers,
Offray
On 18/03/16 11:43, Cyril Ferlicot wrote:
Hi,
Personally I do not like it. (Maybe I'm difficult :) ).
I think that it would be better to have the "illar" at the bottom and
not compressed in the middle.
The second column look like an "y" and we read "Pillary".
And why is there a wave under pillar?
I think that things in a logo have to be symbolic and I do not find
anything from the wave.
Anyway, thank you to invest your time in pillar :)
On Friday, 18 March 2016, Thibault ARLOING
<thibault.arlo...@hotmail.fr <mailto:thibault.arlo...@hotmail.fr>> wrote:
Hi,
With a mate, we've worked on a logo for Pillar.
We just want feedbacks on it.
You can fin the logo join files.
thanks :)
Good afternoon,
Thibault
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Cheers
Cyril Ferlicot