lusy told me that she took into your comments :) Stef
On Oct 12, 2013, at 5:24 PM, b...@openinworld.com wrote: > Stéphane Ducasse wrote: >> >> I would like to thank lusy and jeff for their effort. >> >> Dear All, >> >> let me introduce a new store "PharoShop" >> http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop >> >> Please note the products description - >> I'm not confident in my english and ready to accept your offers for >> inspire the customers :) >> >> Have a great day! >> >> Lusy >> >> >> > Very cool. As well as some creative rephrasing, in general I think you > should include the text that appears on the product. I REALLY like the > "Objects at your finger tips" phrase. Consider adding that to the web site > logo and other, if it can fit appropriately. Note that the originals were > not so wrong, as I spent some with a thesaurus [1] to get it right. > [1] http://thesaurus.com > > > Pharo wave in your mug will inspire for new achievements > For cool looks, get a Pharo wave on your mug to inspire great deeds. Goes > well with any drink. The ultimate live environment. Objects at your > fingertips. > > > Pharo Mug looks attractive with any drinks and will warm You by its orange > > mood. > The orange aura of this Pharo mug will warm your thoughts and spark small > talk with your colleagues. Goes well with any drink. The ultimate live > environment. Objects at your fingertips. > > > Send your mouse to the Smalltalk-inspired environment and start your > > Pharo-might from the desktop > Rest your mouse on a Smalltalk-inspired environment for the foundation of you > Pharo desktop power. The ultimate live environment. Objects at your > fingertips. > > > The usual things take on new meaning thanks to the only small circles > The usual things gain new meaning when blessed with small circles. The > ultimate live environment. Objects at your fingertips. > > > Your beer mug will find its place on Bierdeckel and Beer-party with friends > > will be filled of new ideas > I don't know what Bierdeckel is. Some translations indicated it to be a > drink coaster - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beverage_coaster. Do you mean > this sticker should be sued to convert drink coasters. So I'm not sure about > this one... > Stick this to coasters at parties so your drink can rest easy and inspire > small talk with your friends. The ultimate live environment. > > cheers -ben > >
