> > On 1/13/22 06:14, stephane ducasse wrote: >>> On 12 Jan 2022, at 02:03, Jimmie Houchin <[email protected] >>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >>> >>> I am going to be working my way through some Pharo docs. >>> >>> As I read the books I sometimes see some English that can be improved. >> Yes I noticed it too but I’m running too fast and my english is not my >> native language so >> it is not good. > > Your English is just fine. Probably better than half of Americans. :) > But there are probably things that are definitely more noticeable to native > English speakers. > > > But it is easy to make mistakes and hard to see your own mistakes. I > regularly create documents and then let the stakeholders review for any > mistakes. Frequently the stakeholders will sign off on it. Then days later > come back with corrections. Proofreading is hard.
Yes now I was reading french documents for a native english with really good french and I often ended rewriting a lot of details. >>> What is the proper procedure for doing so? >>> >>> Any pointers to documents to help with this greatly appreciated. >> Oh this is easy just send small PRs and I will read and integrate them. >> Thanks in advance because this is important to get better documentation. > > I have been a lazy Pharo user for a long time. I always found the Pharo > environment productive and easy to use and never pursued properly learning to > be a good Pharo user. I want to remedy that and work my way through several > of the books. go go go go! Learning is fun. BTW you should rerun your benches with the new VM since it has some plugins that were missing. > I figure that is a good time to contribute like this. Oh yes! > > I will keep them coming as I work my way through the books. > > Good to be a contributing citizen. :) And you can really have an impact and feel good about it. Did you read Pharo with Style? I would like to extend it. I should review again the Smalltalk with Style book (it is really nice).
