On Thu, Jun 11, 2015 at 01:54:23PM +0900, Michael Paquier wrote: > On Thu, Jun 11, 2015 at 1:15 PM, Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us> wrote: > > I have committed the first draft of the 9.5 release notes. You can view > > the output here: > > > > http://momjian.us/pgsql_docs/release-9-5.html > > > > and it will eventually appear here: > > > > http://www.postgresql.org/docs/devel/static/release.html > > > > I am ready to make suggested adjustments, though I am traveling for > > conferences for the next ten days so there might a delay in my replies. > > Here are some review comments: > + <para> > + RETURN WHERE > + </para> > What is that?
It says the OID is returned, but where? I don't see it in psql. > + <para> > + WHAT IS A STATISTICS SNAPSHOT? > + </para> > + </listitem> > It defines the last time when the global statistics file of pgstat has > been written. Perhaps documentation should be made clearer. Update with this text: This represents the last time the snapshot files was written to the file system. > + <para> > + The remote snapshot must have been exported by > + <function>pg_export_snapshot()</> or been defined as a > + logical replication slot. This can be used by parallel > + <application>pg_dump</> to use a consistent snapshot across > + <application>pg_dump</> processes. > + </para> > Perhaps "or been defined when creating a logical replication slot > through a replication connection". Sure, updated paragraph: The remote snapshot must have been exported by <function>pg_export_snapshot()</> or been defined when creating a logical replication slot. This can be used by parallel <application>pg_dump</> to use a consistent snapshot across <application>pg_dump</> processes. > + <listitem> > + <para> > + Simplify <acronym>WAL</> record format (Heikki Linnakangas) > + </para> > + > + <para> > + This allows external tools to more easily process <acronym>WAL</> > + files. > + </para> > + </listitem> > More precision could be brought here. What the new format allows is > actually to track more easily what are the blocks modified for > relations, something possible without having the knowledge of the > record type directly. OK, new text: This allows external tools to more easily track what blocks are modified. > + <para> > + This is particularly helpful for warm standbys. > + </para> > "for warm standbys to control the timing at which WAL segment files > are retrieved from a WAL archive." That feels redundant to the major description of the item. > I think that the following items should be added as well: > - Improvement of file version information for Windows builds (Noah > Misch, Michael Paquier), commit ee9569e. The file version information > was missing for a set of contrib modules as well as a handful of > libraries and binaries (like conversion_procs, zic, pg_regress, etc.). > This item should mention that all the binaries and libraries produced > by a Windows build now contain file version information. This could be > merged as well with this item as both are related: > + <para> > + Add icons to all <productname>MSVC</>-built binaries (Noah Misch) > + </para> OK, merged into the existing item: Add icons to all <productname>MSVC</>-built binaries and version information to all <systemitem class="osname">MS Windows</> binaries (Noah Misch) > - Move pg_lzcompress and pg_lzdecompress to libpqcommon, commit > 40bede54. This was some legwork for wal_compression but external > binary tools can take advantage of using it now more freely. Those > APIs have been reworked as well to be more generic, somewhat similarly > to the interface lz4 exposes to the user. Uh, do we actually want to document that API for users? I didn't think so. > - Addition of palloc_extended (8c8a886) to give module developers a > fallback plan instead of OOM ERROR that palloc throws mandatorily. > MemoryContextAllocExtended() can be used on another memory context > than the current one similarly (bd4e2fd9). Feel free to discard this > one if this is not appropriate in the release notes. Same question. I am happy to mention it, but if we mention it, we are encouraging people to use it. -- Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us> http://momjian.us EnterpriseDB http://enterprisedb.com + Everyone has their own god. + -- Sent via pgsql-hackers mailing list (pgsql-hackers@postgresql.org) To make changes to your subscription: http://www.postgresql.org/mailpref/pgsql-hackers