On Wed, Sep 8, 2021 at 12:24 PM Peter Smith <smithpb2...@gmail.com> wrote: > > v2 --> v3 > > The subscription_parameter names are now split into 2 groups using > Amit's suggestion [1] on how to categorise them. > > I also made some grammar improvements to their descriptions. >
I have made minor edits to your first patch and it looks good to me. I am not sure what exactly Tom has in mind related to grammatical improvements, so it is better if he can look into that part of your proposal (basically second patch v4-0002-PG-Docs-Create-Subscription-options-rewording). -- With Regards, Amit Kapila.
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