On Sat, Jun 12, 2021 at 08:21:39AM -0700, Noah Misch wrote:
> On Sat, Jun 12, 2021 at 12:12:12AM -0500, Justin Pryzby wrote:
> > Even if it's not removed, the descriptions should be cleaned up.
> > 
> > | src/include/catalog/pg_proc.dat-  descr => 'terminate a backend process 
> > and if timeout is specified, wait for its exit or until timeout occurs',
> > => I think doesn't need to change or mention the optional timeout at all
> 
> Agreed, these strings generally give less detail.  I can revert that to the
> v13 wording, 'terminate a server process'.

Maybe you'd also update the release notes.

I suggest some edits from the remaining parts of the original patch.

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/func.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/func.sgml
index fbc80c1403..b7383bc8aa 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/func.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/func.sgml
@@ -24998,7 +24998,7 @@ SELECT collation for ('foo' COLLATE "de_DE");
         milliseconds) and greater than zero, the function waits until the
         process is actually terminated or until the given time has passed. If
         the process is terminated, the function
-        returns <literal>true</literal>.  On timeout a warning is emitted and
+        returns <literal>true</literal>.  On timeout, a warning is emitted and
         <literal>false</literal> is returned.
        </para></entry>
       </row>
diff --git a/src/backend/storage/ipc/signalfuncs.c 
b/src/backend/storage/ipc/signalfuncs.c
index 837699481c..f12c417854 100644
--- a/src/backend/storage/ipc/signalfuncs.c
+++ b/src/backend/storage/ipc/signalfuncs.c
@@ -187,12 +187,12 @@ pg_wait_until_termination(int pid, int64 timeout)
 }
 
 /*
- * Signal to terminate a backend process. This is allowed if you are a member
- * of the role whose process is being terminated. If timeout input argument is
- * 0 (which is default), then this function just signals the backend and
- * doesn't wait. Otherwise it waits until given the timeout milliseconds or no
- * process has the given PID and returns true. On timeout, a warning is emitted
- * and false is returned.
+ * Send a signal to terminate a backend process. This is allowed if you are a
+ * member of the role whose process is being terminated. If the timeout input
+ * argument is 0, then this function just signals the backend and returns true.
+ * If timeout is nonzero, then it waits until no process has the given PID; if
+ * the process ends within the timeout, true is returned, and if the timeout is
+ * exceeded, a warning is emitted and false is returned.
  *
  * Note that only superusers can signal superuser-owned processes.
  */
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ pg_terminate_backend(PG_FUNCTION_ARGS)
 {
        int                     pid;
        int                     r;
-       int                     timeout;
+       int                     timeout; /* milliseconds */
 
        pid = PG_GETARG_INT32(0);
        timeout = PG_GETARG_INT64(1);


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