On Wednesday, June 9, 2021 12:06 PM Amit Kapila <amit.kapil...@gmail.com> wrote: > On Tue, Jun 8, 2021 at 6:24 PM vignesh C <vignes...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > Thanks for the updated patch. > > > > I have few comments: > > 1) Should we list the actual system tables like pg_class,pg_trigger, > > etc instead of any other catalog table? > > User has issued an explicit LOCK on pg_class (or any other catalog > > table) > > > > I think the way it is mentioned is okay. We don't need to specify other > catalog > tables. Okay.
> > 2) Here This means deadlock, after this we mention deadlock again for > > each of the examples, we can remove it if redundant. > > This can happen in the following ways: I think this sentence works to notify that commands described below are major scenarios naturally, to the readers. Then, I don't want to remove it. If you somehow feel that the descriptions are redundant, how about unifying all listitems as nouns. like below ? * An explicit <command>LOCK</command> on <structname>pg_class</structname> (or any other catalog table) in a transaction * Reordering <structname>pg_class</structname> by <command>CLUSTER</command> command in a transaction * Executing <command>TRUNCATE</command> on user_catalog_table > > 3) Should [user] catalog tables be catalog tables or user catalog > > tables [user] catalog tables > > > > The third point is not clear. Can you please elaborate by quoting the exact > change from the patch? IIUC, he means to replace all descriptions "[user] catalog tables" with "catalog tables or user catalog tables" in the patch, because seemingly we don't use square brackets to describe optional clause in normal descriptions(like outside of synopsis and I don't find any example for this). But, even if so, I would like to keep the current square brackets description, which makes sentence short and simple. Best Regards, Takamichi Osumi