On Tue, Oct 27, 2020 at 09:17:43AM +0530, Amit Kapila wrote:
> On Tue, Oct 27, 2020 at 8:51 AM Justin Pryzby <pry...@telsasoft.com> wrote:
> >
> > On Fri, Oct 23, 2020 at 10:45:34AM +0530, Amit Kapila wrote:
> > > On Fri, Oct 23, 2020 at 8:59 AM Amit Kapila <amit.kapil...@gmail.com>
> > > wrote:
> > >
> > > While updating the streaming stats patch, it occurred to me that we
> > > can write a better description spill_bytes as well. Attached contains
> > > the update to spill_bytes description.
> >
> > + This and other spill
> > + counters can be used to gauge the I/O occurred during logical
> > decoding
> > + and accordingly can tune
> > <literal>logical_decoding_work_mem</literal>.
> >
> > "gauge the IO occurred" is wrong.
> > Either: I/O *which* occured, or I/O occurring, or occurs.
> >
> > "can tune" should say "allow tuning".
> >
> > Like:
> > + This and other spill
> > + counters can be used to gauge the I/O which occurs during logical
> > decoding
> > + and accordingly allow tuning of
> > <literal>logical_decoding_work_mem</literal>.
> >
> > - Number of times transactions were spilled to disk. Transactions
> > + Number of times transactions were spilled to disk while performing
> > + decoding of changes from WAL for this slot. Transactions
> >
> > What about: "..while decoding changes.." (remove "performing" and "of").
> >
>
> All of your suggestions sound good to me. Find the patch attached to
> update the docs accordingly.
@@ -2628,8 +2627,8 @@ SELECT pid, wait_event_type, wait_event FROM
pg_stat_activity WHERE wait_event i
<para>
Amount of decoded transaction data spilled to disk while performing
decoding of changes from WAL for this slot. This and other spill
- counters can be used to gauge the I/O occurred during logical decoding
- and accordingly can tune <literal>logical_decoding_work_mem</literal>.
+ counters can be used to gauge the I/O which occurred during logical
+ decoding and accordingly allow tuning
<literal>logical_decoding_work_mem</literal>.
Now that I look again, maybe remove "accordingly" ?
--
Justin
