On Fri, 17 Jul 2020 at 11:17, David G. Johnston <david.g.johns...@gmail.com> wrote:
> On Fri, Jul 17, 2020 at 8:10 AM Dave Cramer <davecra...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> This started out with just fixing >> >> "One option do deal" to " One option to deal" >> >> But after reading the rest I'd propose the following patch. >> > > Suggest replacing "though" with "however" instead of trying to figure out > what amount of commas is readable (the original seemed better IMO). > > "However, the transaction records are fairly small and" > Works for me. Thanks, Dave
