Some review comments for v8

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doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_createsubscriber.sgml

1.
+   which ensures each table is brought up to a synchronized state. When using
+   internally generated publications, the publications automatically include
+   all sequences in the database; however, sequence values are not
+   automatically synchronized.

Maybe "automatically" 2x in the same sentence is a bit much. The rest
can also be simpler.

SUGGESTION
Internally generated publications include all sequences in the
database, but their values are not automatically synchronized.

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2.
+      objects defined by that publication. Otherwise,
+      <application>pg_createsubscriber</application> creates a publication
+      using <link linkend="sql-createpublication-params-for-all-tables">
+      <literal>FOR ALL TABLES</literal></link> and <link
+      linkend="sql-createpublication-params-for-all-sequences"> <literal>ALL
+      SEQUENCES</literal></link>. These generated publications has the
+      following name pattern:

2a.
The space before the last <literal> tag here is probably not deliberate.

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2b.
typo: /has the/have the/

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Kind Regards,
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia


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