Hi everybody,
Being a technical writer, I attached a small patch that fixes minor
language stuff.
Thank you.
Elena Indrupskaya
Postgres Professional Company
Moscow, Russia
On 09.05.2024 07:03, Bruce Momjian wrote:
I have committed the first draft of the PG 17 release notes; you can
see the results here:
https://momjian.us/pgsql_docs/release-17.html
It will be improved until the final release. The item count is 188,
which is similar to recent releases:
release-10: 189
release-11: 170
release-12: 180
release-13: 178
release-14: 220
release-15: 184
release-16: 206
release-17: 188
I welcome feedback. For some reason it was an easier job than usual.
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
index 5a741ff16f..1ecf40fc73 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <mich...@paquier.xyz>
<listitem>
<para>
-Restrict "ago" to only appear at the end of in interval values (Joseph Koshakow)
+Restrict "ago" to only appear at the end in interval values (Joseph Koshakow)
</para>
<para>
@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ Author: Tomas Vondra <tomas.von...@postgresql.org>
<listitem>
<para>
-Allow a BRIN indexes to be created using parallel workers (Tomas Vondra, Matthias van de Meent)
+Allow BRIN indexes to be created using parallel workers (Tomas Vondra, Matthias van de Meent)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -941,7 +941,7 @@ Allow the creation of WAL summarization files (Robert Haas, Nathan Bossart, Hube
</para>
<para>
-These files record the block numbers that have changed within an LSN range, and is useful for incremental file system backups. This is controlled by the server variables
+These files record the block numbers that have changed within an LSN range and are useful for incremental file system backups. This is controlled by the server variables
summarize_wal and wal_summarize_keep_time, and introspected with pg_available_wal_summaries(), pg_wal_summary_contents(), and pg_get_wal_summarizer_state().
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1113,7 +1113,7 @@ Allow the application of logical replication changes to use hash indexes on the
</para>
<para>
-Previously only btree indexes could be use for this purpose.
+Previously only btree indexes could be used for this purpose.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2185,7 +2185,7 @@ Allow pg_basebackup and pg_receivewal to use dbname in their connection specific
</para>
<para>
-This is useful for connection poolers who are sensitive to the database name.
+This is useful for connection poolers that are sensitive to the database name.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2346,7 +2346,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <mich...@paquier.xyz>
<listitem>
<para>
-Remove the Microsoft Visual Studio Studio-specific Postgres build option (Michael Paquier)
+Remove the Microsoft Visual Studio-specific Postgres build option (Michael Paquier)
</para>
<para>
