> On 2 Apr 2024, at 00:56, Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us> wrote:
> I ended up writing the attached doc patch. I found that some or our > text was overly-wordy, causing the impact of what we were trying to say > to be lessened. We might want to go farther than this patch, but I > think it is an improvement. Agreed, this is an good incremental improvement over what we have. > I also moved the <strong> text to the bottom of the section +1 A few small comments: +considers performing minor upgrades to be less risky than continuing to +run superseded minor versions.</em> I think "superseded minor versions" could be unnecessarily complicated for non-native speakers, I consider myself fairly used to reading english but still had to spend a few extra (brain)cycles parsing the meaning of it in this context. + We recommend that users always run the latest minor release associated Or perhaps "current minor release" which is the term we use in the table below on the same page? -- Daniel Gustafsson
