At 2024-01-12 11:21:52 -0600, nathandboss...@gmail.com wrote:
>
> From: Nathan Bossart <nat...@postgresql.org>
> Date: Thu, 11 Jan 2024 21:55:25 -0600
> Subject: [PATCH v6 1/3] reorganize shared memory and lwlocks documentation
> 
> ---
>  doc/src/sgml/xfunc.sgml | 182 +++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------
>  1 file changed, 114 insertions(+), 68 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/xfunc.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/xfunc.sgml
> index 89116ae74c..0ba52b41d4 100644
> --- a/doc/src/sgml/xfunc.sgml
> +++ b/doc/src/sgml/xfunc.sgml
> @@ -3397,90 +3397,136 @@ CREATE FUNCTION make_array(anyelement) RETURNS 
> anyarray
>     </sect2>
>  
> […]
> -     from your <literal>shmem_request_hook</literal>.
> -    </para>
> -    <para>
> -     LWLocks are reserved by calling:
> +      Each backend sould obtain a pointer to the reserved shared memory by

sould → should

> +      Add-ins can reserve LWLocks on server startup.  Like with shared 
> memory,

(Would "As with shared memory" read better? Maybe, but then again maybe
it should be left alone because you also write "Unlike with" elsewhere.)

-- Abhijit


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