> On 21 Aug 2023, at 12:15, Junwang Zhao <zhjw...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> On Mon, Aug 21, 2023 at 5:16 PM Daniel Gustafsson <dan...@yesql.se> wrote:
>> 
>>> On 18 Aug 2023, at 11:10, Junwang Zhao <zhjw...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>> In the following sentence, I believe either 'the' or 'a' should be kept, not
>>> both. I here keep the 'the', but feel free to change.
>> 
>>> * handle: The handle of an existing object, or for DSM_OP_CREATE, the
>>> - *    a new handle the caller wants created.
>>> + *    new handle the caller wants created.
>> 
>> Since the handle doesn't exist for DSM_OP_CREATE, both "a handle" and "the
>> handle" seems a tad misleading, how about "the identifier for the new handle 
>> the
>> caller wants created"?
>> 
> 
> Sounds great

Done that way, thanks!

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Daniel Gustafsson



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