On Thu, May 25, 2023 at 10:29 AM Stephen Frost <sfr...@snowman.net> wrote:
> I was referring specifically to that ordering as not being ideal or in
> line with the rest of the flow of that section.  We should integrate the
> concerns higher in the section where we outline the reason these things
> matter and then follow those with the specific steps for how to address
> them, not give a somewhat unclear reference from the very bottom back up
> to something above.

Ah, I misunderstood. I'll give that a shot.

Thanks!
--Jacob


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