On Wed, May 24, 2023 at 04:57:59PM +0200, Erik Rijkers wrote:
> Op 5/24/23 om 15:58 schreef Bruce Momjian:
> > On Wed, May 24, 2023 at 12:23:02PM +0700, John Naylor wrote:
> > >
> > > On Wed, May 24, 2023 at 11:19 AM Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us> wrote:
>
> Typos:
>
> 'from standbys servers' should be
> 'from standby servers'
>
> 'reindexedb' should be
> 'reindexdb'
> (2x: the next line mentions, erroneously, 'reindexedb --system')
>
> 'created only created' should be
> 'only created'
> (I think)
>
> 'could could' should be
> 'could'
>
> 'are now require the role' should be
> 'now require the role'
>
> 'values is' should be
> 'value is'
>
> 'to marked' should be
> 'to be marked'
All good, patch attached and applied. Updated docs are at:
https://momjian.us/pgsql_docs/release-16.html
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diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml
index bb92fe5cf9..88d6514ad7 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>
- Allow logical replication from standbys servers
+ Allow logical replication from standby servers
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -126,11 +126,11 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <mich...@paquier.xyz>
<listitem>
<para>
-Change REINDEX DATABASE and reindexedb to not process indexes on system catalogs (Simon Riggs)
+Change REINDEX DATABASE and reindexdb to not process indexes on system catalogs (Simon Riggs)
</para>
<para>
-Processing such indexes is still possible using REINDEX SYSTEM and reindexedb --system.
+Processing such indexes is still possible using REINDEX SYSTEM and reindexdb --system.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ Create subscription statistics entries at subscription creation time so stats_re
</para>
<para>
-Previously entries were created only created when the first statistics were reported.
+Previously entries were created only when the first statistics were reported.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -777,7 +777,7 @@ Simplify permissions for LOCK TABLE (Jeff Davis)
</para>
<para>
-Previously the ability to perform LOCK TABLE at various lock levels was bound to specific query-type permissions. For example, UPDATE could could perform all lock levels except ACCESS SHARE, which
+Previously the ability to perform LOCK TABLE at various lock levels was bound to specific query-type permissions. For example, UPDATE could perform all lock levels except ACCESS SHARE, which
required SELECT permissions. Now UPDATE can issue all lock levels. MORE?
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ Restrict the privileges of CREATEROLE roles (Robert Haas)
</para>
<para>
-Previously roles with CREATEROLE privileges could change many aspects of any non-superuser role. Such changes, including adding members, are now require the role requesting the change to have ADMIN OPTION
+Previously roles with CREATEROLE privileges could change many aspects of any non-superuser role. Such changes, including adding members, now require the role requesting the change to have ADMIN OPTION
permission.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -946,7 +946,7 @@ Add dependency tracking of grantors for GRANT records (Robert Haas)
</para>
<para>
-This will guarantee that pg_auth_members.grantor values is always valid.
+This guarantees that pg_auth_members.grantor values are always valid.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -3017,7 +3017,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us>
<listitem>
<para>
-Allow required extensions to marked as non-relocatable using "no_relocate" (Regina Obe)
+Allow required extensions to be marked as non-relocatable using "no_relocate" (Regina Obe)
</para>
<para>
