Attachment is a corrected version based on Tom's suggestion. Thanks.
On Wed, Aug 3, 2022 at 9:56 PM Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us> wrote: > > Erikjan Rijkers <e...@xs4all.nl> writes: > > I don't think these "were"s are wrong but arguably changing them to > > "have" helps non-native speakers (like myself), as it doesn't change the > > meaning significantly as far as I can see. > > I think it does --- it changes the meaning from passive to active. > I don't necessarily object to rewriting these sentences more broadly, > but I don't think "have issued" is the correct phrasing. > > Possibly "The user issued ..." would work. > > regards, tom lane -- Regards Junwang Zhao
0001-doc-rewrite-some-comments-to-make-them-more-precise.patch
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