At Thu, 21 Jul 2022 23:10:04 -0400, Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us> wrote in
> Fujii Masao <masao.fu...@oss.nttdata.com> writes:
> > On 2022/07/21 14:54, Kyotaro Horiguchi wrote:
> >> At Thu, 21 Jul 2022 11:45:23 +0900, Fujii Masao
> >> <masao.fu...@oss.nttdata.com> wrote in
> >>> - (errmsg("could not locate required checkpoint record"),
> >>> + (errmsg("could not locate a valid checkpoint record in backup_label
> >>> file"),
>
> >> "in backup_label" there looks *to me* need some verb..
>
> > Sorry, I failed to understand your point. Could you clarify your point?
>
> FWIW, the proposed change looks like perfectly good English to me.
> "locate" is the verb. It's been way too many years since high
> school grammar for me to remember the exact term for auxiliary
> clauses like "in backup_label file", but that doesn't need its
> own verb. Possibly Kyotaro-san is feeling that it should be
> like "... checkpoint record in the backup_label file". That'd
> be more formal, but in the telegraphic style that we prefer for
> primary error messages, omitting the "the" is fine.
Maybe a little different. I thought that a checkpoint record cannot
be located in backup_label file. In other words what is in
backup_label file is a pointer to the record and the record is in a
WAL file.
I'm fine with the proposed sentsnse if the it makes the correct
sense. (And sorry for the noise)
By the way, I learned that the style is called "telegraphic style".
regards.
--
Kyotaro Horiguchi
NTT Open Source Software Center
