On Tue, Jul 05, 2022 at 01:47:27PM +0200, Alvaro Herrera wrote: > OK, I have adopted all your proposed changes, thanks for submitting in > both forms. I did some more wordsmithing and pushed, to branches 12 and > up. 11 fails 'make check', I think for lack of Docbook id tags, and I > didn't want to waste more time. Kindly re-read the result and let me > know if I left something unaddressed, or made something worse. The > updated text is already visible in the website: > https://www.postgresql.org/docs/devel/brin-intro.html
One issue: + summarized range, the range that the new page belongs into + does not automatically acquire a summary tuple; "belongs into" sounds wrong - "belongs to" is better. I'll put that change into my "typos" branch to fix later if it's not addressed in this thread. -- Justin