On Mon, Jul 24, 2017 at 9:08 PM, Jeff Janes <jeff.ja...@gmail.com> wrote:
> On Sun, Jul 16, 2017 at 8:47 AM, Michael Paquier <michael.paqu...@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>> What do you think about the patch attached?
>
> Looks OK.  Should it mention specifically "On a hot standby" rather than "On
> a standby"?  Otherwise people might be left confused on how they are
> supposed to do this on a generic standby.  It is the kind of thing which is
> obvious once you know it, but confusing the first time you encounter it.

Yes, right. Let's update as you suggest.

>>      <para>
>>       You can retrieve a list of WAL sender processes via the
>> -     <link linkend="monitoring-stats-views-table">
>> +     <link linkend="monitoring-stats-dynamic-views-table">
>>       <literal>pg_stat_replication</></link> view. Large differences
>> between
>> In the previous paragraph I have noticed that the link reference is
>> incorrect. pg_stat_replication is listed under
>> monitoring-stats-dynamic-views-table.
>
> Yes, that is clearly wrong.  But why not link directly to the description of
> the view itself, pg-stat-replication-view, rather than the correct table
> which mentions the view?  Is that the accepted docs style to link to the
> more generic place?  (Same thing applies to your patch, it could link
> directly to pg-stat-wal-receiver-view.

Yes, that's even better.

> Sorry for the delay, it took me awhile to get the new doc build system to
> work (solution seems to be, "Don't use CentOS6 anymore")

:)
Thanks for the review.
-- 
Michael

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