On Tue, Mar 9, 2021 at 5:18 PM Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us> wrote:

> "David G. Johnston" <david.g.johns...@gmail.com> writes:
> > On Tue, Mar 9, 2021 at 4:50 PM Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us> wrote:
> >> Would it be better
> >> to turn the para into a bulleted list, which we could introduce with
> >> "The key differences are:" ?
>
> > Indeed, reworking the rest of the paragraph around that introduction
> would
> > be much better.
>
> v2 attached.
>
>
Thank you.  That reads much better, aside from maybe a couple of missing
commas.

-       Certain function attributes such as strictness don't apply to
+      Certain function attributes, such as strictness, don't apply to

David J.

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