> On 28 Oct 2022, at 11:30, Daniel Gustafsson <dan...@yesql.se> wrote: > >> On 28 Oct 2022, at 04:44, PG Doc comments form <nore...@postgresql.org> >> wrote: >> >> The following documentation comment has been logged on the website: >> >> Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/15/cube.html >> Description: >> >> I believe the use of First Person (I) is to be avoided in the documentation. >> It is incredibly rare in all of the documentation. > > I agree with this (and the other two emails about the same), these instances > would be better reworded to match the rest of the documentation.
The attached patch rewords the first person form sentences to match the rest of the documentation. The "acknowledgment" sections are left as-is as I believe they are free to have a more personal form. I also re-arranged the section on PO file editors a bit to keep the PO file editor paragraph on editors only and not also contain important translation information. -- Daniel Gustafsson https://vmware.com/
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