On Tue, Oct 19, 2021 at 06:41:54PM -0700, David G. Johnston wrote: > On Tue, Oct 19, 2021 at 2:33 PM Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us> wrote: > > Drew DeVault <s...@cmpwn.com> writes: > > Minor grammatical fix. > > Hmm, I'm not sure that reads any better than before. > > > <para> > > - Strictly speaking, this process is iteration not recursion, but > > + Strictly speaking, this process is iteration, not recursion, but > > <literal>RECURSIVE</literal> is the terminology chosen by the SQL > standards > > ... although I think this text is mine, so naturally I'd think > that. Anyone else have an opinion? > > > > If I read that aloud to myself there is a comma after iteration. > > That said, given that a comma and a "but" later we use the word "RECURSIVE" > the > clarification that the process isn't recursion seems redundant. If one knows > what it means to be "recursive" then they will understand the juxtaposition of > "iteration" and "recursive" just fine. If they do not, I don't think adding > the word "recursion" is going to make much difference. > > Thus: > Strictly speaking, this process is iteration, but <literal>RECURSIVE</literal> > is the terminology chosen by the SQL standards committee." > > Because the above sounds just fine, I'd argue that if one does leave "not > recursion" it should be set off by a comma.
I went with new wording, which should make this even clearer; patch attached. -- Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us> https://momjian.us EDB https://enterprisedb.com Indecision is a decision. Inaction is an action. Mark Batterson
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/queries.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/queries.sgml index 516fbcbf37..51b752709e 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/queries.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/queries.sgml @@ -2172,7 +2172,7 @@ SELECT sum(n) FROM t; <note> <para> - Strictly speaking, this process is iteration not recursion, but + Strictly speaking, this process is iterative, not recursive, but <literal>RECURSIVE</literal> is the terminology chosen by the SQL standards committee. </para>