On 2019-08-16 07:22, Erik Rijkers wrote:
On 2019-08-16 02:26, Stephen Frost wrote:
Greetings,

* Joshua D. Drake (j...@commandprompt.com) wrote:
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they seem to be simply removing words and removing content that is

For what it's worth, I think the proposed changes are all solid
improvements. The text reads better with them, and that's what this is
about -- not whether the removed little text-pieces were 'true' or
not.


However, there is one typo:

+    read independently.  There are many extrernal programming

extrernal -> external
(and I would say that dropping that word 'external' would be another
little improvement)

and:

Lasty -> Lastly

importantance -> importance













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