It's a nice image as is (no need to crop). Maybe experiment with the
same setting and different angles and times (which would create
different light angles). I would be tempted to try B&W, high contrast
or even HDR :)

Toine

On Tue, 6 Apr 2021 at 18:10, Rick Womer <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Thanks Dan, Larry, and Stan!
>
> I played with various crops for a while too, and finally decided that the 
> edge of the flower bed, leaves, and chair each had roes to play. When I 
> cropped any of them out it didn’t “work” anymore.
>
> Puzzles me too!
>
> Rick
>
> > On Apr 5, 2021, at 4:47 PM, Stanley Halpin <[email protected]> 
> > wrote:
> >
> > I am usually a champion of cropping. When I clicked through to your image I 
> > had already seen the others’ suggestions about maybe going more minimal by 
> > cropping some elements.
> > I toyed with the idea of a square crop of just the foreground bricks and 
> > the main brick walkway. And also with a crop that would take some off the 
> > top to eliminate the distraction of the chair.
> >
> > For me, neither of those would work. What I see as the main subject in the 
> > image is/are the dead leaves on the walkway toward the upper part of the 
> > image. The interesting lines of sunshine in the foreground are just there. 
> > On their own, it would be just a pattern. But my eye goes past those lines 
> > and the chair and the “noise” on the left edge help guide my attention to 
> > the leaves.
> >
> > In short, I like it as it is. If it were mine and if I were to do anything 
> > else, I would darken the bricks so that they receded further in the 
> > background. Though I do like Larry’s notion of having a nude lying on the 
> > walkway (as though she were sunbathing?) And then the chair and leaves etc 
> > could be/should be cropped because then the composition would have a point 
> > of interest.
> >
> > Stan
> >
> >
> >> On Apr 3, 2021, at 11:58 AM, Rick Womer <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>
> >> A March leftover: Sunlight shining through our back yard fence on a March 
> >> afternoon:
> >>
> >> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/2021/March-2021/Miscellany/i-vpMpxzK/A
> >>
> >> (K-5, DA 17-70)
> >>
> >> Comments always appreciated, from withering criticism to blush-inducing 
> >> flattery.
> >>
> >> Rick
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