So what was the subject? The rain or the water Lilly? With rain as the subject alone it's not much of an image IMO.
-----Original Message----- >From: Rick Womer <[email protected]> >Sent: Sep 5, 2016 8:56 AM >To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List <[email protected]> >Subject: Re: PESO - Water Lily in the Rain 2 > >Thanks for the comments. I'm ambivalent about the re-do, and Dan >pinpointed the reason. > >Rick >http://photo.net/photos/RickW > > >On Mon, Sep 5, 2016 at 12:08 AM, Alan C <[email protected]> wrote: >> I didn't have the courage to say it! Depends on what you consider the >> subject to be. >> >> Alan C >> >> -----Original Message----- From: Daniel J. Matyola >> Sent: Monday, September 05, 2016 4:22 AM >> To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> Subject: Re: PESO - Water Lily in the Rain 2 >> >> >> The cropped version has a stronger composition and pleases the eye, but it >> loses the feeling of "in the rain" that the first has. >> >> >> Dan Matyola >> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola >> >> On Sat, Sep 3, 2016 at 2:39 PM, Rick Womer <[email protected]> wrote: >> >>> Re-cropped and adjusted, as per a few of the comments. >>> >>> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=18279924 >>> >>> The original: >>> >>> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=18279353&size=lg >>> >>> Comments appreciated. >>> >>> Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
