Thanks a lot for the feedback. Igor Roshchin wrote: > Hi Larry, > > The picture on the face is interesting, but I don't think the strawberry > fits into that picture. > I don't know why: either the color gamma is wrong, the texture is > different (smooth face vs. textured stawberry), the size is small, or > something else. > > Of all photos with strawberries, the better one is probably LRC30829. > But there are two things that could be improved: > 1. She should have a strong, definitive hold of that strawberry: holding > the strawberry itself, not the "green tail". > (the same applies to all photos) > 2. Something is missing in the face expression. > > I think these are the best photos in this series: > LRC30749 > LRC30720 > > These could've been a nice shot showing the full picture, but the > face expression is subpar on it: LRC30873. > This face expression is much better: LRC30745, but there other problems > here. > > HTH, > > Igor > > > Larry Colen Mon, 28 Jul 2014 15:59:30 -0700 wrote: > > A friend of mine does face painting and wanted to do a photo shoot with me to > show off her work. She got a mutual friend to be a model (you may recognize > the the model from previous photos of mine). The whole evening was very > experimental and educational. I felt like I was spending more effort fighting > the lights and our limited time to shoot than I was just getting photos. > > > Here's a photo that despite it's problems, is still kind of nice. The fill > flash and the hair light didn't trigger, but the resulting effect seems to > have > worked. > > https://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/14578333810/in/set-72157645988395145 >
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