Dan, I think Ken is right, stronger as just the balloons. Or include more of the iphone/ipad photographers, down to their feet. Then the photo becomes about them and the balloons. Regards, Bob S.
On Sat, Aug 11, 2012 at 7:53 AM, Daniel J. Matyola <[email protected]> wrote: > Thanks, Ken. I think you are probably correct. > > In this frame, I was trying to include the iPad and cell phone being > used to capture the scene. There were more photographers using those > devices at the festival than photographers uding DSLRs and compact > digital cameras combined. > > Dan Matyola > http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola > > > On Sat, Aug 11, 2012 at 8:39 AM, Kenneth Waller <[email protected]> wrote: >> The stuff along the bottom edge is distracting IMO. >> A stronger image would be that nice arrangement of balloons all by itself. >> >> -----Original Message----- >>>From: "Daniel J. Matyola" <[email protected]> >>>Subject: PESO: Off they go >>> >>>http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=16195123 >>>Dan Matyola >>>http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola >> >> >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> [email protected] >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.

