Quoting Larry Colen <[email protected]>:
I'm putting together a blurb book of a dance weekend that I took
photos at last April.
Feedback solicited.
http://www.blurb.com/bookstore/detail/3308627?alt=I%27ve+got+the+blues...+and+then+some
Well, having dumped the latest Flash Player upgrade and re-installed
an earlier version, I can now see the preview.
As to content, my view is pretty much the same as Stan's. The book
will obviously appeal more to those who were at the event than to a
general audience. As a non-dancer, the photos became a bit monotonous
to me. That said, there are some fine photos there, especially those
of some of the musicians.
The only comment I have regarding layout is that the section captions
seem a little subtle and in a couple of cases they seem a bit too
close to an image (eg page 21). On Page 2, I thought that the caption
at the bottom (which sets the context of the book) could have been in
a larger font and maybe centred under the image.
On the cover, I thought that the sub-heading could be in a slightly
smaller font than the main title, maybe even re-locate the sub heading
under the cover photo - that cover image fits the title well and is
very well chosen. The back cover photo is great as well.
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Cheers
Brian
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Brian Walters
Western Sydney Australia
http://lyons-ryan.org/southernlight/
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