took a quick look at your images - I'll comment on the first two
#5212-10 - IMO you've included too much in this image for it to be any more
than a documentary of the site. By loosing most of the RH side, making it a
portrait orientation (Including the walker, shoreline, the bridge opening &
the background boat) it becomes a much stronger image. The contents of the
RH side is competing with the stronger elements on the LH side.
#5209-9 Same general critique applies here - loose about a quarter of the
image on the RH side up to a bit right of the bridge openinmg.
My $.02
Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
----- Original Message -----
From: "Chris Mitchell" <[email protected]>
Subject: GESO: The canal is cold again.
2010 comes to an end as it began. The Grand Union Canal runs close to my
house and it's frozen again. Very seasonal, but knowing our weather, it'll
probably be thawed by Christmas day.
http://www.mitch.myzen.co.uk/ColdCanal2/
Chris
PS I just had to include another picture of Christine A's favourite
boat...
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