I, also, feel that #2 is an improvement, Brian. As before, I, very much, like this composition.
Jack --- On Tue, 7/7/09, Brian Walters <[email protected]> wrote: > From: Brian Walters <[email protected]> > Subject: PESO - Bush Shed; Take 2 > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> > Date: Tuesday, July 7, 2009, 12:35 AM > G'day all > > Thanks for the comments on the first version. > > Bill - appreciate you taking the time to do a revised crop > but I can't > quite make up my mind on it. I think the image is > improved without the shadow but the shed then looks a bit > low in the > frame and the right hand edge of the fenced paddock is > lost. > > I've had another go at it, retaining the original crop but > reducing the > brightness of the shed (thanks Jack, Dave) and trying to > reduce the > depth of foreground shadow (thanks Bruce). > > Thanks also Christine, Ken and Dan for the comments. > > Anyway, here's the revised version. You can compare > with the earlier > one by using the "Previous" link. > > > http://www.blognow.com.au/PESO/149652/Bush_Shed_Take_2.html > > > > Cheers > > Brian > > ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ > Brian Walters > Western Sydney Australia > http://members.westnet.com.au/brianwal/SL/ > > > -- > > > -- > http://www.fastmail.fm - Or how I learned to stop > worrying and > > love email again > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
