Both very nice! However, while you composition is just right on both, I much prefer the pleasing track lines in #2. Only thing I'd do is even the lighting by bringing up that of the top third or so. #2 suffers from that mystery bit of weed or debris to the right.
Jack --- On Mon, 1/5/09, Brian Walters <[email protected]> wrote: > From: Brian Walters <[email protected]> > Subject: PESO - Tracks > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> > Date: Monday, January 5, 2009, 2:48 AM > G'day all > > I'm looking for a bit of PDML objectivity with these > two images - > because I've lost mine. I've been looking at the > damn things for so > long, I oscillate between thoughts of "not bad" > and "what a crock of > s**t"..... and back again. > > These are similar images taken at dusk on a south coast > beach (New South > Wales). I've given up on colour renderings (dirty > colours, noisy), so > mono conversion is the last straw. > > Comments and (particularly) suggestions most appreciated. > > http://www.blognow.com.au/PESO/108276/Tracks_1.html > > http://www.blognow.com.au/PESO/108277/Tracks_2.html > > > > Thanks and Cheers > > Brian > > ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ > Brian Walters > Western Sydney Australia > http://members.westnet.com.au/brianwal/SL/ > -- > > > -- > http://www.fastmail.fm - Faster than the air-speed velocity > of an > unladen european swallow > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
