On 6/19/07, Rick Womer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Frank, > > The elbow sticking into the frame from the right is > distracting, and the trees aren't blurred enough to > catch my interest. There is nothing else going on. > > Shot from the front of the car, so that we could see > peoples' faces, this could be a really good shot. > > Rick
Thanks everybody for your comments! You seem (as a whole) to ratify my thoughts - it's an okay shot, some good ideas in there, but not quite enough to hold one's attention. The good part (trees whizzing by) is not prominent/obvious enough, and there's not enough going on inside the streetcar to make things more interesting. I guess my first impression was right. Stuff to work on for the next time! Thanks! cheers, frank -- "Sharpness is a bourgeois concept." -Henri Cartier-Bresson -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
