Hi Bruce ...

First, it's a great capture - the look on the pitcher's face is great. 
However, this one loses impact in the details.  The slight tilt to the
fence can easily be corrected as Paul suggests, and I think it would help
the presentation.  A little softer OOF area in the background would also
help, as would bringing down the brightest area on the trousers and the
pitcher's arm.  My biggest complaint is that the pic looks washed out -
lack of contrast.  That's easily corrected, but I'd not necessarily adjust
the contrast throughout the frame - work on the main subject a bit so he'll
pop a little more.  Then you'll have a "big league" image <LOL>  Here's a
Q&D touchup I just fiddled with a bit.

http://home.earthlink.net/~ebay-pics/giants_0112_stdadj.jpg

Shel



> [Original Message]
> From: Bruce Dayton 

> Little league pitching.
> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/giants_0112.htm
>
> Comments welcome
>



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