Markus:

Thanks for taking the time to comment on My PUG entry. See my responses after your comments.

Markus Maurer wrote:

Closed Door
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A classic interpretation of "Close". I would not imagine that this shot was
taken in Hawaii!
This nineteenth century building is indeed in Hawaii, right on the main drag (Alii Street) in Kauilua-Kona.

I think that the composition could be a bit stronger by moving the door more
off center and maybe even going closer.
You are correct on both counts, I am afraid to say.

The floor and the stones lack a bit of detail which could be fixed
on the computer.  Is it slightly overexposed or is that my monitor setting?
This shot was taken around noon time on a bright and sunny tropical day. That is why the wooden walkway is someshat washed out. I left it that way, however, because it gives a hint of the weather and latitude. It was dark on my monitor, so I brightened it a bit before submitting it. That may have been a mistake.

Thanks again,

Dan M

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