I disagree with Jerome. I like the image a lot, and think it's much stronger in B&W, without that distracting yellow line. The one further change I would suggest is cropping the right side just about where the P in the copyright notice is. That would cut out the light-colored vertical thingy, and emphasize more the similarity of the wheel you're shooting through and the wheel in the distance.
Rick --- Jerome Reyes <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > I posted this before but no one commented > > except to say they couldn't > > get to the page...\ > > I saw the horse photo (not sure if you got my > suggestion about moving the > copyright notice to a less conspicuous spot)... but > I must've missed the > bridge one. > > > > I kind of like it, but wasn't really satisfied, > then decided > > to do a B&W conversion. > > > http://www.mindspring.com/~webster26/PESO_--_bridgeworksb&w.html > > To be totally honest, I can't say that it does a > whole lot for me. > Shooting from behind the "wheel thing" seems like a > decent enough idea, > but the perspective is not as interesting as I > would've anticipated. > Overall, nothing really of interest for me to grab a > hold of. On a more > positive note, I will say that I like the placement > of the copyright > notice much better. But as for the b&w conversion, > for me the initial > composition wasn't really strong enough to hold it's > own in a b&w version, > so it doesn't quite work for me. Admittedly, the > original version didn't > grab me, either... but the yellow line across the > bottom at least gave me > something to look at. > > > As usual comments are welcome but may be totally > ignored. > > Well then, ignore away :o) ... But hey... at least I > *did* say I liked the > horse photo :o) Anyhow, I hope that helps, > > - Jerome > > __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around http://mail.yahoo.com
