Hi Shel it is the first photo I see from you and I like it, because it seems to be real kids life to me. The gang seems proud and cool and enjoying the photo session but trying to hide their thoughts somewhat.
Critics: Nothing missing if it is a single snapshot I would like to see alternatives shoots with the eyes of the boy in the background next to the girl more visible and more of the bike in the foreground to compare which view I would prefer. What was your distance to the group, you must have been pretty close with a 20mm, assuming the image is unaltered. Do you have more of them, I am getting appetite..... Markus > >Perhaps you remember this gang from an earlier pic. Here >they are again, hanging out on the sidewalk in San >Francisco's Mission District one summer afternoon. Comments >and crits are always welcome.
