Hi! Frank's analysis is extensive and exhaustive... <grin>
There is one thing that I particularly would think needs fixing. You see, without the title or the story it is not that easy to see that the left-most boy actually shoots with bow and arrow. Which I humbly think wasn't your original intention... Don't be discouraged. You did fine job with DOF control and I see little wrong with this picture except of the above. I don't know how I would approach same shot. Perhaps, though risky it is, I would try to shoot my shot from behind the tree which is in front of the right-most boy... But then it is a bad idea to be in front of the line of fire... Just my cents. As I said, don't be discouraged... Boris
