Hi, Quan: Thanks for your support and suggestions!
I have already updated the reference to RFC9050 as your suggestion. Regarding to the recommendation of second point, if it will not arise again the obscure of its meaning, keeping it simple will be better. If there is no more argument for this simplification, we will update document later accordingly. Aijun Wang China Telecom > On May 31, 2023, at 11:15, [email protected] wrote: > > Dear Chairs and WG, > > I have read the new version and I support the WGLC. > Some editorial suggestions are as following shown. > In section 5.1, "Where: <cci-list> is as per > [I-D.ietf-pce-pcep-extension-for-pce-controller]." It may update to RFC9050. > In section 5.1, "Further only one and one kind of BPI, EPR, or PPA object > MUST be present." It is a little confused. Maybe that can be changed to "One > BPI, EPR, or PPA object MUST be present and others should be ignored." > > Best Regards, > Quan > > > > > <<[Pce] WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-20 > <<Dhruv Dhody <[email protected]> Tue, 16 May 2023 22:16 UTCShow header > Hi WG, This email starts a 2-weeks working group last call for > draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-20 [1]. Please indicate your support > or concern for this draft. If you are opposed to the progression of the draft > to RFC, please articulate your concern. If you support it, please indicate > that you have read the latest version and it is ready for publication in your > opinion. As always, review comments and nits are most welcome. The WG LC will > end on Wednesday 31st May 2023. We will also notify the IDR WG about this > WGLC. A general reminder to the WG to be more vocal during the > last-call/adoption and help us unclog our queues :) Thanks, Dhruv & Julien > [1]https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip/ > > _______________________________________________ > Pce mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
