Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-pce-association-group-09: No Objection

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Thank you  for the work put into this document. I have two COMMENTs and one
nits: all easy to fix

Regards,

-éric

== COMMENTS ==

-- Section 6.1 --

Please state the obvious: unused "Flags" bits MUST be set to 0.

-- Section 6.1.1 --

Figure 5 includes the type and length of the TLV while figure 1 in previous
section does not include the type and length field. Or am I misreading the
figures ?

== NITS ==

-- Section 4.1 (and others) --

The caption of figure 1 contains "TLV" but it is actually only about the "V" of
the "TLV" ;-) See above COMMENT


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