Hi Tom,
> >
> > The draft does not have any other pending actions.
>
> Mmm why can I not resist the challenge?
>
[[Dhruv Dhody]] I am glad you took the challenge and pointed these out :), I
will update them along with the forthcoming yangdoctor's review!
Thanks!
Dhruv
> You say
> RFC Ed.: In this section, replace all occurrences of 'XXXX' with the
> actual RFC number ...
> and then
> import ietf-te { prefix "te"; reference "RFC XXXX"; }
> import ietf-te-types { prefix "te-types"; reference "RFC
> XXXX";
> import ietf-tls-server { prefix "tls-server"; reference "RFC
> XXXX"; }
> import ietf-tls-client { prefix "tls-client"; reference "RFC
> XXXX";
>
> Mmm I think not!
>
> And, I like all the references in the YANG module but they need to be in
> the references of the I-D. I think you are missing
>
> 3209
> 5088
> 5089
> 5520
> 5541
> 5557
> 6536
> 8232
> 8306
>
> while
> 8253
> is there but Informative; my preference is for such references to be
> Normative.
>
> A common practice is to have a section just prior to the module proper
> which gives references to all the RFC which the module references, which
> obviates the appearance of warnings about 'Unused Reference'.
>
> Tom Petch
>
>
> > Dhruv
> > PS. The yang errors in the datatracker are in the imported yang
> modules.
> >
> > On Mon, Oct 15, 2018 at 6:32 PM <[email protected]> wrote:
> >
> > >
> > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> > > directories.
> > > This draft is a work item of the Path Computation Element WG of the
> IETF.
> > >
> > > Title : A YANG Data Model for Path Computation
> Element
> > > Communications Protocol (PCEP)
> > > Authors : Dhruv Dhody
> > > Jonathan Hardwick
> > > Vishnu Pavan Beeram
> > > Jeff Tantsura
> > > Filename : draft-ietf-pce-pcep-yang-09.txt
> > > Pages : 116
> > > Date : 2018-10-15
> > >
> > > Abstract:
> > > This document defines a YANG data model for the management of
> Path
> > > Computation Element communications Protocol (PCEP) for
> communications
> > > between a Path Computation Client (PCC) and a Path Computation
> > > Element (PCE), or between two PCEs. The data model includes
> > > configuration data and state data (status information and
> counters
> > > for the collection of statistics).
> > >
> > >
> > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-yang/
> > >
> > > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-yang-09
> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-yang-09
> > >
> > > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-pcep-yang-09
> > >
> > >
> > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> > > submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at
> > > tools.ietf.org.
> > >
> > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> > >
>
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