On Mon, Apr 4, 2011 at 8:29 PM, Lon Hohberger <l...@redhat.com> wrote: > ----- Original Message ----- >> Attached are patches for the Introduction chapter of "Clusters From >> Scratch". > > General: > > * Clarifies some things; ex: preface seemed to say we wouldn't be using the > crm tool, then we used it extensively. > > > Comments: > > * "...resources and services under it's control...": "it's" -> "its". Does > it make sense (Andrew?) to mention member (node, whatever) failures?
yes, i think this is mentioned elsewhere but it would not hurt to repeat it since traditionally thats the type of failures clusters were designed to recover from. > > * It looks like you removed the basic answer to "What is Pacemaker?". You > could, rather than removing the bit about what Pacemaker is and replacing it > with only what it does, say: > > "Pacemaker is a cluster resource manager which achieves..." > > * This looked weird: > > "cluster low level infrastructure" > > I'm not sure this clarifies anything; "cluster infrastructure" was fine. > > * Should there be a link to the heartbeat website > (http://linux-ha.org/wiki/Heartbeat) for the Heartbeat? > > * "In this quide" ... ? > > * "Then we will...": needs comma? "Then, ..." > > > I had already looked at the changes to SVGs visually, so I will refrain from > attempting to nit-pick SVG diffs. > > -- Lon > > _______________________________________________ > Pacemaker mailing list: Pacemaker@oss.clusterlabs.org > http://oss.clusterlabs.org/mailman/listinfo/pacemaker > > Project Home: http://www.clusterlabs.org > Getting started: http://www.clusterlabs.org/doc/Cluster_from_Scratch.pdf > Bugs: > http://developerbugs.linux-foundation.org/enter_bug.cgi?product=Pacemaker > _______________________________________________ Pacemaker mailing list: Pacemaker@oss.clusterlabs.org http://oss.clusterlabs.org/mailman/listinfo/pacemaker Project Home: http://www.clusterlabs.org Getting started: http://www.clusterlabs.org/doc/Cluster_from_Scratch.pdf Bugs: http://developerbugs.linux-foundation.org/enter_bug.cgi?product=Pacemaker
