Nice press release Astrid. * I've made some minor tweaks, and have the following suggestions:
I question the statement: "VMDK - first time". 1. Haven't we already been releasing as zipped VMDK images? See https://live.osgeo.org/en/download.html . 2. Either way, I think it would be better to expand this sentence. 3. Assume the reader doesn't know what VMDK stands for. If including the current statement, I'd suggest expanding to: "Published as a VMDK virtual image for the first time." * I'd suggest dropping: XXX, says "....Thank you OSGeoLive team and congratulations on this release." It is probably only worth adding if you find some super important person, such as "head of EU GIS programs". Even then, it is possibly not worth mentioning in "leaderless" open source organizations. Feel free to accept or reject these. This press release is great and ready to go from a tech writer's point of view. On Mon, 5 Apr 2021 at 22:32, Angelos Tzotsos <gcpp.kal...@gmail.com> wrote: > Thanks Astrid, lets discuss during the meeting tomorrow. > > On 4/3/21 3:52 PM, Astrid Emde (OSGeo) wrote: > > Hello all, > > > > I started a press release draft > > > > Please have a look and add ideas. > > > > https://trac.osgeo.org/osgeolive/wiki/Press%20Release%2093 > > > > Astrid > > _______________________________________________ > > osgeolive mailing list > > osgeolive@lists.osgeo.org > > https://lists.osgeo.org/mailman/listinfo/osgeolive > > > -- > Angelos Tzotsos, PhD > President > Open Source Geospatial Foundation > http://users.ntua.gr/tzotsos > > _______________________________________________ > osgeolive mailing list > osgeolive@lists.osgeo.org > https://lists.osgeo.org/mailman/listinfo/osgeolive > -- Cameron Shorter Technical Writer, Google
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