Dear all,

I browsed through the diffs.
This version improved a lot. Thanks.
It addresses my concerns mentioned before/during the IETF 121, about information model vs/and data model.

One key message to stress to the community IMO: for the first time I believe, an information model is defined in YANG, as mentioned . See "The information model is defined using YANG [RFC6020 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc6020>] with Data Structure Extensions [RFC8791 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8791>], allowing the model to remain abstract and decoupled from specific implementations in accordance with [RFC3444 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3444>]. This abstraction supports different data model implementations - for example, in YANG, IPFIX [RFC7011 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7011>], gMNI [gMNI <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-discardmodel-05#gMNI>] or SNMP [RFC1157 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc1157>] - while ensuring consistency across implementations"


- MIB-II [1213] => a better reference is RFC 2863
- For SNMP [RFC1157], at least refer to SNMPv3

Regards, Benoit

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Subject:        [OPSAWG]I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-discardmodel-05.txt
Date:   Mon, 03 Mar 2025 13:58:41 -0800
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Internet-Draft draft-ietf-opsawg-discardmodel-05.txt is now available. It is a
work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of
the IETF.

Title: Information and Data Models for Packet Discard Reporting
Authors: John Evans
Oleksandr Pylypenko
Jeffrey Haas
Aviran Kadosh
Mohamed Boucadair
Name: draft-ietf-opsawg-discardmodel-05.txt
Pages: 45
Dates: 2025-03-03

Abstract:

This document defines an information model and corresponding data
model for packet discard reporting. The information model provides
an implementation-independent framework for classifying packet loss
to enable automated network mitigation of unintended packet loss.
The data model specifies a YANG implementation of this framework for
network elements.

The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-discardmodel/

There is also an HTML version available at:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-discardmodel-05.html

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-discardmodel-05

Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts


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