Thanks for the context, Med.  I’ll note that in the review.

Other authors, please confirm you wish to be listed as such.

Joe

From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>
Date: Saturday, March 8, 2025 at 04:39
To: Joe Clarke (jclarke) <jcla...@cisco.com>, Wubo (lana) 
<lana.w...@huawei.com>, Zitao Wang (wangzi...@huawei.com) 
<wangzi...@huawei.com>, Guangying Zheng <zhengguangy...@huawei.com>
Cc: opsawg@ietf.org <opsawg@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: Shepherd procedural review
Re-,

Please see inline.

Cheers,
Med

De : Joe Clarke (jclarke) <jcla...@cisco.com>
Envoyé : vendredi 7 mars 2025 17:37
À : draft-ietf-opsawg-secure-tacacs-y...@ietf.org
Cc : opsawg@ietf.org
Objet : Shepherd procedural review

As I work through the shepherd write-up, I have questions:


·      Has this module been implemented yet?  No implementations are called 
out, but I wouldn’t typically expect to see that in a YANG module draft.
[Med] No aware of any yet.

·      Can each of you confirm to me you are willing to be listed as an author 
for this document.
[Med] ACK.

·      See IDNITS.  You have a downref to RFC 9257 and several warnings on 
formatting.  Those are likely okay, but the downref should be addressed.
[Med] RFC 9257 should have been already in the downref registry. The downref is 
explicitly cited in the IETF LC of 
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/radext/qcLe6YEVF_wFQaZEK7gN-2ProaU/, 
which is in the RFC Editor Queue. I expect that to be fixed.


I have uploaded an initial shepherd write-up to 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-secure-tacacs-yang/shepherdwriteup/
 pending the answer of these questions and other fixes to the document.

[Med] Thank you
Joe

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